Waverider

Waverider Sunset water float Paddle turn hop up and go Surfing life freedom Bmdavey@ 02/11/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 8:45:00 PM

Brian, thank you for the comment, that's the idea. Learning from one another. :) HUGS... anytime you want to say hi or read one of my newest. Fell free to express yourself in any way comfortable. Be yourself... LINDA

Brian Davey
Date: 2/13/2016 6:04:00 PM

Thank you Linda that means a lot and I will

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 8:32:00 PM

It's a nice take on a haiku. Brian, whatever you do don't look back. Enjoy the Wave while the ride is good. Awesome haiku. I like the ending imagery. LINDA

Brian Davey
Date: 2/11/2016 8:40:00 PM

Thank you very much, I still have so much to learn about poetry and the different types of poems. I am going to try and do some new things compared to my usual couplet style so we'll see how they turn out! Thank you for your support and reading you all make me strive to be better

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2016 3:35:00 PM

sounds marvelous, Brian

Brian Davey
Date: 2/11/2016 8:38:00 PM

thank you I have been surfing for almost 35 years now it is my serenity