Brian Davey Poet Haiku

Waverider

Waverider




                                     Sunset water float
                              Paddle turn hop up and go
                                    Surfing life freedom





                                            Bmdavey@
                                             02/11/16

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Poet Destroyer A February 11, 2016 at 8:45 PM Brian, thank you for the comment, that's the idea. Learning from one another. :) HUGS... anytime you want to say hi or read one of my newest. Fell free to express yourself in any way comfortable. Be yourself... LINDA Brian Davey February 13, 2016 at 6:04 PM Thank you Linda that means a lot and I will

Poet Destroyer A February 11, 2016 at 8:32 PM It's a nice take on a haiku. Brian, whatever you do don't look back. Enjoy the Wave while the ride is good. Awesome haiku. I like the ending imagery. LINDA Brian Davey February 11, 2016 at 8:40 PM Thank you very much, I still have so much to learn about poetry and the different types of poems. I am going to try and do some new things compared to my usual couplet style so we'll see how they turn out! Thank you for your support and reading you all make me strive to be better

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2016 at 3:35 PM sounds marvelous, Brian Brian Davey February 11, 2016 at 8:38 PM thank you I have been surfing for almost 35 years now it is my serenity