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Wave Crest To Breaking Point

Your hedonistic desires replaced by a gonz0-journalism truth while you stand at the precipice, crying at the high-water mark. you're not alone, a whole generation of alma matter hopefuls gather here to stare at the place where kerouac could write ten novels leave me here to waste energy on hedonistic, wave-crest fantasy far rom the sting of a breaking point.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/21/2024 11:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2016 11:36:00 PM
Cailey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/2/2008 8:35:00 PM
beatiful, I like the style and the way explain things.
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Date: 7/29/2008 7:54:00 PM
Much to think about here. A creative approach to the topic. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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