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Watery

clouds on lake drifting
in the rose forever days
silver glide, geese sun

in puff clouds swimming
until the soaking downpour
red blooms cried for joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alhemaidy Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Very nice poem!
Buehler Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 8:47 PM
Thank you, Abdullah. :)
Pandit Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 10:29 AM
They roam bearing water--till they burst into soaking downpour--as you say. Great summer images, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Vijay.
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 10:22 AM
- Lovely written, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
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