Waterway

Our 

                                                     Deep

                                                     River

                                                Gently flows,

                                              home of aquatic 

                                  life, animals, fish, and reed plants,

                      as it meanders through green picturesque countryside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Oh i like this poem. The words all flow together.have a nice day my friend.
Pett Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Thank you very much Darlene for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this. :))
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 2:32 AM
an absolute gem of a nature so soothing and beautiful write Roy and I love the form you used I think I've only written one before:-) hugs jan xx
Pett Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much Jan for your very kind comment, I'm so pleased you liked this, I found some comfort when writing this, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))
Kiser Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Ooh I love this; very serene imagery; soothing and lovely.
Pett Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:30 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment, really pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Harris Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 9:24 PM
You motivated me to try the Fibonacci form!
Pett Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:24 AM
Hi Anita, thank you very much for your very kind comment, I will look forward to reading your poem in Fibonacci form, thanks again Roy. :))
Sands Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Very nice Roy. I haven't tried that form yet. It looks fun. You did very well with it :)
Pett Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, I only went to 13 syllables, perhaps should have attempted 21? Thanks again. :))
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