Waterway

Our Deep River Gently flows, home of aquatic life, animals, fish, and reed plants, as it meanders through green picturesque countryside.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/16/2017 1:10:00 PM

Oh i like this poem. The words all flow together.have a nice day my friend.

Roy Pett
Date: 8/16/2017 2:43:00 PM

Thank you very much Darlene for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2017 2:32:00 AM

an absolute gem of a nature so soothing and beautiful write Roy and I love the form you used I think I've only written one before:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 8/12/2017 6:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan for your very kind comment, I'm so pleased you liked this, I found some comfort when writing this, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/9/2017 10:25:00 PM

Ooh I love this; very serene imagery; soothing and lovely.

Roy Pett
Date: 8/10/2017 2:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, really pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Anita Harris

Date: 8/9/2017 9:24:00 PM

You motivated me to try the Fibonacci form!

Roy Pett
Date: 8/10/2017 2:24:00 AM

Hi Anita, thank you very much for your very kind comment, I will look forward to reading your poem in Fibonacci form, thanks again Roy. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/9/2017 8:48:00 AM

Very nice Roy. I haven't tried that form yet. It looks fun. You did very well with it :)

Roy Pett
Date: 8/9/2017 8:52:00 AM

Thank you very much Heidi, I only went to 13 syllables, perhaps should have attempted 21? Thanks again. :))