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Waterspout

Dark gray culumus bonds the aquamarine sea-- Whirling waterspout

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Date: 9/25/2009 2:58:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. I like the alliteration in the last line. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for stopping by with your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2009 5:52:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Ismael. Love, Carol

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/24/2009 7:46:00 PM

I've only seen one on TV... But I thought... Nature's Showing Us... We've still got things right here on earth to get fascinated with... Great Haiku MoonBee

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM

I love this one. It is very interesting to watch these. Nature at its most interesting. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 7:59:00 AM

Oooh, such a wonderful description, Ismael! I have seen the waterspouts from both onshore and offshore in a boat. They appear like towers to the sky! Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn