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Water's Edge

at the water's edge
tiny creatures seek refuge
warm sand inviting

written November 21, 2021
Puerto Vallarta, Mexico

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Jack Ellison

November 26, 2021 at 5:50 AM

Spent 20 consecutive years on Florida and Mexico beaches with my first wife Linda! Nothing could replace those years! The memories of those years remain forever implanted in my psyche!

L Milton Hankins

November 26, 2021 at 8:47 AM

Ah, I know what you mean, Jack. Deborah and I went to Mexico and Costa Rica for about thirty consecutive years, sometimes twice a year. Can't beat it!

Gershon Wolf

November 25, 2021 at 7:21 PM

Such a wonderful three lines, Milt. So easy on the mind to relate to -- yet carrying with each line, a taste of eternal time. Marvelous haiku! Sands on the Seashore, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

November 25, 2021 at 5:40 AM

It's so relaxing on the beach just people watching and watching marine creatures going about their business. Tom

L Milton Hankins

November 25, 2021 at 6:01 PM

Yes sir, Tom. That's what makes the beach such an incredibly relaxing place. Kind of throwing cares to the wind, taking some deep breaths, and enjoying everyone "going about their business." Delightful!