Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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Watermelon

Whopping big or small sized -
With inside red flesh of
Wonderful sweetness, this
Weighty fruit’s percent of
Water is ninety-two!
Wow! That’s great hydration.
Wish I had some right now.

May 10, 2021
For Kim Merryman's Pleiades W Poetry Contest

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Ann Foster May 14, 2021 at 9:18 AM Wow, wonderful, work... Ann

Eve Roper May 13, 2021 at 8:53 PM Great flow in your verse, Andrea, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. I will never get it. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus May 13, 2021 at 1:38 PM Definitely a whopping good Pleiades, Andrea! I love watermelons, and the seeds I planted not long ago have sprouted; I have to make sure my tortoise won't go after them!! Regards // paul

Juliet Ligon May 11, 2021 at 7:28 PM Ninety-two percent water; thanks for the fun fact. No wonder it's called "watermelon." This flows nicely. Congratulations! Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2021 at 10:24 PM watermelon sugar. .. high!!

Joseph May May 11, 2021 at 7:22 PM Congrats on your win Andrea, Very nicely done

Gershon Wolf May 11, 2021 at 6:02 PM Hard to believe that anything 92% water could taste so incredibly sweet... Congrats on your win, Andrea. :) gw

Janice Canerdy May 11, 2021 at 4:21 PM Descriptive, appealing WINNING poem, Andrea. Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 11, 2021 at 4:19 PM Congratulations on your 'sweet' winning poem, Andrea. Nicely done! :)

JC Brul May 11, 2021 at 4:18 PM This is a perfect summer treat dear Andrea! I love this..A fave for me! Congratulations!

Kim Merryman May 11, 2021 at 1:36 PM Now I want watermelon! A wonderfully descriptive write, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2021 at 12:36 PM - "Wish I had some right now" ... exactly what I want now, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Terry Flood May 11, 2021 at 11:24 AM Damn, now I want one too. Congrats on your win, Andrea. Terry

Christuraj Alex May 11, 2021 at 11:18 AM Congratulations!

Sotto Poet May 11, 2021 at 8:42 AM Hi Andrea, congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades Regards and hugs

Lindsay Laurie May 10, 2021 at 11:00 PM Hello Andrea ... great in summer and frozen watermelon balls are natural icy poles; delicious - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Regina Mcintosh May 10, 2021 at 5:39 PM Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2021 at 3:39 PM Yummy!

Caren Krutsinger May 10, 2021 at 11:46 AM I am ready to bite into this one! A wow for me!

Anitha Jayasankar May 10, 2021 at 9:55 AM This is so well penned my friend ... Words flow so well... Hoping a top placement... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Line Gauthier May 10, 2021 at 5:39 AM Yummy ~ oops wrong letter

Daniel Turner May 10, 2021 at 4:58 AM It's still a little early for the sweet ones but I do love me some watermelon. When I was a kid they were 4 for a dollar. Now they're anywhere from 6 dollars to 10 dollars each, depending on where you shop. A mouthwatering write, Andrea.