Watering Frowns

Watering Frowns


      Do you need to cry
          Eyes drip watered skin
              Feeling as if you could die
                 Always the loser wanting to win...

      Do you have to lie
          Mouth open to shut again
              Feel as if you will die
                   Your upside down happy grin...



bmdavey@
03/02/16
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Hicks Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Perhaps if they get watered long enough, they'll bloom into wonderful smiles. Sadness can be rejuvenating, depending on the time and place. Great flow to this.
Davey Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Yes maybe they can but a lot of people today seem to like to frown instead
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