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Watering Frowns

Watering Frowns Do you need to cry Eyes drip watered skin Feeling as if you could die Always the loser wanting to win... Do you have to lie Mouth open to shut again Feel as if you will die Your upside down happy grin... bmdavey@ 03/02/16

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Date: 3/5/2016 1:05:00 AM
Perhaps if they get watered long enough, they'll bloom into wonderful smiles. Sadness can be rejuvenating, depending on the time and place. Great flow to this.
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/5/2016 11:58:00 PM
Yes maybe they can but a lot of people today seem to like to frown instead

Book: Shattered Sighs