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Waterfalls of Expectations

spilling mother’s milk
Nature’s bounty feeds her child -
river’s youth fades fast


Susan Ashley
April 29, 2020


~ Fourth Place ~
Premiere Contest: Hi-Ku (5)
Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Watt Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Happy to arrive back at this delightful snapshot of nature with your amazing insight superimposed. Congrats on this worthy haiku victory, my PS-PS. Wishing you a cup overflowing with blessings in 2021 ~ John
Ashley Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, John. Your return visit is appreciated twice as much and your beautiful comments are received with joy! I cherish your heartwarming congrats as well. Please accept my apologies for my late reply, my dear PS-PB. Warmest wishes for you and yours to have a happy and healthy new year.. ~Susan
Koplin Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Susan!
Ashley Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Thank you for your kind congrats, Mark. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes for you and yours to have a happy and healthy new year.. ~Susan
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:46 AM
an absolute delight Susan, adding this lovely poem into my faves it is so beautiful:-) my congrats on your win,. Happy New year :-) hugs Jan xx
Ashley Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Jan. Your beautiful comments are received with joy! I cherish your heartwarming congrats as well as the great honor of your fave. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes for you and yours to have a happy and healthy new year.. ~Susan
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January 2, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Happy New Year dear rhyme time now in haiku friend! What a beautiful image of the nature feeding her children with her milk of life! Once again your beautiful heart pens a poem filled with compassion and nurturing images! Sending congratulations on wings of joy. Happy New Year! May it be a year of hope and miracles.
Ashley Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, my inspiring rhyme time friend. Your comments are so very lovely and are cherished along with your joyful congrats. You always see into the heart of my poetry, dear Sam, and I appreciate the beauty of your insightful soul. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes for you and yours to have a happy and healthy new year. Here's to hope and miracles.. ~Susan :))
Mitra Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Wow....so beautiful, congrats on your win Susan Have a Happy and Blessed New Year :)
Ashley Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Carol, for your uplifting comments and kind congrats. It is a pleasure to hear from you, my friend. Please accept my apologies for my late reply. Warmest wishes for you and yours to have a happy and healthy new year.. ~Susan
Brul Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 5:21 PM
What a treasure I found! So majestic imagery! Spilling mother's milk~~~ what a stunning sight!! Nature's bounty feeds her child! ~~~ what a dainty imagination!! This one of the breathtaking haikus I ever seen! A FAVE for me..
Ashley Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Dear JCB, I'm thrilled by your response to my haiku, your inspiring comments truly lift my spirits. Thank you for your encouraging words. Your poetic friendship is ever appreciated as is the lovely honor of your fave. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Nicole Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Oh my !! Such an amazing and inspiring way to view a Waterfall. Moments in Nature. This is beautiful in so many wonderful ways. I love what you have created here my dear friend. This belongs in my favorites. I wish to read again and again. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Hello, my sweet friend! Your thoughtful comments fill me with elation, Brandy. Your sensitive pen is so full of beauty that for you to find beauty in my poem is a compliment I revel in. Thank you for the honor of your fav as well as the treasured gift of your comments. I'm so happy your enjoyed my haiku :)) Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Ahhh!! enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Ashley Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 8:33 AM
We both share a deep love and respect for Nature, Sara. Thank you for your gracious visit. I truly appreciate your lovely comment. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Sands Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 1:23 PM
This is beautiful Susan. Very nice :)
Ashley Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Thank you, Heidi, your kind heart shines. It’s nice to know you’re feeling better. Your gracious comments are appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 10:53 AM
- A beautiful haiku, reminds me of the poem I posted yesterday: "Wild, Beautiful And Vulnerable" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, Anne-Lise. Now I'm to read your poem.. :) Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Ball Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 3:20 PM
A lovely Haiku Susan. The pic fits beautifully. A nature lover myself I love this. God Bless, JB
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Judy. I’m pleased you enjoyed my haiku. Your presence is inspiring and your love of Nature is reflective of your kind and gentle spirit. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Kiser Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 6:12 PM
Beautiful imagery here, the river does sustain us.
Ashley Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Thank you, M. L. I relish your response to my haiku and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:01 PM
I agree with Paul, Susan. This beautiful haiku would make a lovely haiga. It is sure to shine in the contest. Blessings xxoo
Ashley Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Connie, your visit and your gracious comments are delightful. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me, both you and Paul are so kind in your assessment of my haiku.. I would love to see it paired with a beautiful Japanese painting to make a haiga, but I'm not skilled at the art of calligraphy nor this style of painting. Your presence here is treasured always, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:41 PM
What a great picture to go with your poem. Looks like milk coming from the rocks. Enjoy your weekend...............
Ashley Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Indeed it does, Paula. Thank you for your gracious visit and lovely comments. It's a pleasure to receive your kind words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Zahid Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 11:31 AM
Striking imagery!! Stay blessed
Ashley Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, Paghunda, for your visit and lovely comment. Both are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Lovely, Susan.
Ashley Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Line. Your visit and wonderful comment is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:54 PM
I love how you tackled this haiku prompt, Susan. Creative and more! This would make a lovely haiga. ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend. // paul
Ashley Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, my dearest friend, for sharing your most lovely thoughts with me. It is my wonderful pleasure to be greeted by your shining presence here, Paul. Yes, the Japanese style of haiga is beautiful and your idea warms my heart - now, where are my brushes? It's been a long time since I've used them! :)) Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 12:11 AM
A dear friend of mine told me I should read more haiku by Susan Ashley (oh, wait, it was you!) I'm glad you did, because this is stunning. Mother nature providing sustenance for her children is a beautiful image, combined with a brief nod to how quickly youth passes us by. I encourage a read of Emily Dickinson's "Nature the Gentlest Mother Is". Your poetry never ceases to dazzle me, my friend. Many blessings to you! Hugs ~ John
Ashley Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 9:02 PM
My dear friend, I'm so glad you followed your good friend's advice! :)) Your insightful comments fill my heart to brim with elation. I appreciate your golden presence here immensely and also your recommended reading of "Nature the Gentlest Mother Is" - Emily Dickinson was such a nature lover and I relished reading every word. She loved New England's landscapes and seasons as much as I do. Thank you, John, you truly are a wonderful poetry friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Dutta Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 9:57 PM
What a nice haiku. I admire most. Waterfalls specially attract me.
Ashley Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 8:39 PM
I love waterfalls too, Anisha. Thank you for your lovely visit and for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Hello Susan Ashley, mother's nature's waterfalls are beautiful wherever they are. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ashley Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Indeed they are, Darlene. Thank you for your gracious visit and lovely comments, my dear friend. Enjoy your evening. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 2:40 PM
a profound one here. I am really loving the many waterfall haiku I see!!
Ashley Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 8:59 PM
Indeed! There are many great haiku for this contest. Thank you, Andrea, for your inspiring comments. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 8:53 AM
My dear friend, Susan. Sorry I've not been in muse state of mind lately. Great to see you...hope all is well. This is a beautiful haiku with fantastic imagery...Wonderful! Best and warmest wishes always, Charlie
Ashley Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 8:57 PM
Charlie, I have so missed your charming presence. It is such a pleasure to see you and to receive your lovely comments. I understand about not being in a muse state of mind lately - sometimes you just have to allow your mind to go elsewhere for a while. Thank you for your gracious visit and kindness, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 9:13 PM
This could be a 'weaning' entry. Soup mail, please. Thanks, gw
Ashley Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 11:19 AM
Lol! Oh, how I relish your witty and poetic way with words! :)) Thank you, dear Gershon, for your ever encouraging comments, your friendship and for the Soup mail. Your gracious kindness is truly appreciated, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 6:03 PM
Amazing!
Ashley Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for your visit and wonderful response, Kim. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
One Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 11:20 AM
A brilliant haiku... Love the use of words
Ashley Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 7:31 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Silent One. I’m pleased you enjoyed my haiku. Your presence is always inspiring and appreciated. Warmest wishes always my dear friend.. ~Susan
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