Waterfalls - Duo Rhyme

Roaring torrents go tumbling down
Splashing beads of clear tiny crowns.
Sparkling tears from heaven above,
Lathering pools of cleansing love.
Frothy white, like a snowy dove,
Rushing waters that push and shove.
Prism rainbows gleaming above,
God's handiwork for his beloved.
Cascading falls, deafening sound,
Earth's paradise, beauty unbound.

        ©  07-10-2012
Revised: 02-27-2013

100% Nature Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 7, 2013 at 11:18 AM
congrats~Yours truly *SKAT
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March 1, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Tanya, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Great descriptive winning work..Congrats...Sara
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:47 AM
A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Tanya. Love, Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful imagery, Tanya! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 2:24 AM
Tanya congrats on your win,. excellent piece...David
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 12:59 AM
Tanya, You have captured both the aesthetic physical immersed with spiritual emotion in this lovely Duo-rhyme. I love your lines: "Lathering pools of cleansing love. Frothy white, like a snowy dove," Mary would have loved it as I do. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:07 PM
Tanya, I enjoyed your use of imagery in this duo rhyme for my contest and wish to congratulate you on your win. It's very pretty!
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Very cathartic and flowing with peaceful words and thoughts
Palmer Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 1:29 PM
what a view,love it Tanya
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 12:05 PM
It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Tanya. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 6:20 PM
Such beautiful and lively images in your poem. Sure to be a winner.
Sivey Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Wow, the lovely descriptions are astounding, I really enjoyed the pristine expressions you created here! Great Work!
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