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Waterfalls

From the highest of highs, flows non-stop Wide bright sky tent as her backdrop Like a break-dancer, she sways Amidst hot sunbeam blaze Soulful songs she sings With crystal springs She's an art Of heart Warm Calm Upstart Tears apart Wild water wings Falling like white strings With her bewitching glaze Like a mystic child's star gaze Flows, forming many a dewdrop Bounding and bouncing in bliss flip-flop

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Date: 12/21/2023 9:45:00 PM
I love the rhymes in this and how it flows with some very unique lines such as “ Like a break-dancer, she sways Amidst hot sunbeam blaze“ and the ending too is very creative. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/25/2023 10:10:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 12/21/2023 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the nonet contest
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/25/2023 10:10:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 12/17/2023 1:58:00 PM
Hello Christuraj Alex :-)Very nice! Have a very nice day ~ AA
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/17/2023 6:56:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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