Waterfall Sijo

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Shimmering cascades of tumbling clear water free falling.

Tiny sparkling crystal-like droplets escaped the mighty deluge.

Sun soaked the waterfall glistened like diamond jewelry.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2024 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner in the Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/6/2024 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Sara, appreciated. Best wishes Wen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 11:28:00 PM

Congrats for your win and sorry for overlooking your poem. You painted well with words the image that you show us.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/5/2024 3:44:00 AM

lol You're too much, you didn't have to do that ! Thanks Andrea. Best wishes from Wen.

Jay Narain

Date: 1/19/2024 10:59:00 AM

Loved the picturesque Sijo. My fave.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/20/2024 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear Jay.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/19/2024 9:45:00 AM

This is breathtaking my dear SV. The imagery is so vivid and exquisite. I love the choice of your artistic, skilled words where every word paints a picture - a gorgeous scene with nature at its most spectacular. You are great with these short forms ( of which I’ve never tried) Thank you for sharing and inspiring. Hugs to you x

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/20/2024 8:48:00 AM

Christina your comments are a joy to read. I am glad you liked this one. I must admit my muse was at its best. I like it too. Every best wish to you my friend.