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Waterfall My Life

Waterfall My Life My Life… Why? I am still Here? Not that… You Care? What makes you… So Perfect? The Definition… Of Perfection: Not me? I am just… A Person? I Guess… Only You Know? Why…

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Date: 7/20/2011 5:43:00 AM
Ok Patricia. This was just ok for me. An excessive use of question marks in a lot of the wrong places helped to make it somewhat confusing. I thought the way that it was displayed as a waterfall of words was clever. Rockman
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Date: 11/30/2010 10:08:00 AM
good one!
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