Patricia Tam Poet I do not know?

Waterfall My Life

Waterfall My Life
                        My Life…
                                   Why?
                             I am still Here?
                                        Not that…
                                          You Care?
                                        What makes you…
                                                   So Perfect?

                                             The Definition…
                                                     Of Perfection:

                                                                      Not me?
                                                                  I am just…
                                                                            A Person? 
                                                                               I Guess…  
                                                                            Only You Know?
                                                                                            Why…

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Rockman Pritts July 20, 2011 at 5:43 AM Ok Patricia. This was just ok for me. An excessive use of question marks in a lot of the wrong places helped to make it somewhat confusing. I thought the way that it was displayed as a waterfall of words was clever. Rockman

Susan Palli November 30, 2010 at 10:08 AM good one!