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Waterfall

Waterfall Escaping from far confined spaces longing for freedom over the rim Highlighted flowing wavy tresses cascading over rocky shoulders Rushing sounds of an endless stampede racing and galloping through the air Frothy fluffs of white bubbly splendor splashing, glistening in the sunlight Sandra M. Haight October 27, 2014 ~7th Place~ Contest: Some Form of Crystalline Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/9/2014 5:05:00 AM

Your poem truly tells a complete story with a beginning a middle and an end. Great writing Sandra! Congrats on your win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/9/2014 8:25:00 PM

Connie, thank you for stopping by with your positive comments and congratulations. I really appreciate it. Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2014 3:30:00 PM

Love your creative imagery, Sandra. Both movement and sound make a great impact. Congrats on a fine win! // paul

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/9/2014 8:26:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I am pleased you like it. It was nice of you to stop by with your encouraging comments and congratulations. It was a fun form to work with. Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/8/2014 8:18:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/8/2014 2:42:00 PM

Thanks, Brenda. This was another fun form to work with. Hugs, Sandra

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2014 4:52:00 AM

Nicely cascaded piece, congrats on the win

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/8/2014 2:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dr. Ram. Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2014 2:22:00 AM

I like the idea of a stampede and how this was developed fully within your artpiece, Sandra.. thank you for being part of my contest with special congrats!

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2014 1:57:00 PM

Hi Nette, it was an honor to participate in your contest. I enjoyed working with this form, and I thank you for choosing mine to be among the winners. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2014 10:05:00 PM

a rush of beauty in your waterfall!! Congrats for your win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2014 1:55:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you for stopping by with your congratulations. Sandra

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2014 10:13:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for stopping by with your congratulations and nice comment. Sandra

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/6/2014 9:49:00 PM

I can hear that roar and see that cascade from the shoulder in my mind so clearly !! Mark of a good poet in my book.. to let one see and hear what they hear. Just glorious !! Congratulations on your win !!

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2014 10:02:00 PM

Hi Debra, thank you so much for stopping by with your encouraging comments, congratulations, and fav. I really appreciate it so much. It was a great form to work with. Sandra

Debra Squyres
Date: 11/6/2014 9:50:00 PM

Putting this in my favs... thank you !!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/6/2014 8:35:00 PM

I would of liked to see this much higher on the list but I am happy you placed. Congratulations on your win Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2014 10:12:00 PM

Thanks, Maurice, I was happy to have placed, and it's nice that you really enjoyed it. I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 3:32:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2014 3:35:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 1:14:00 AM

Wow, what a stunning write. This is my favorite so far on this theme.

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/29/2014 8:31:00 AM

Happy day for me with all your great comments! Thanks so much, Maurice. Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2014 2:08:00 PM

beautifully creative with wonderful imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2014 3:20:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, so happy you like it. Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/27/2014 12:33:00 PM

Very beautifully written Sandra. I especially love the third stanza, because when I think of waterfalls the loudness of them is the first that comes to mind. Definitely a 7

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2014 3:19:00 PM

Hi Brenda, thank you so much for your encouraging comments, and for your generous rating! Hugs, Sandra