Sandra Haight Poet Verse

Waterfall

Waterfall

Escaping
from far confined spaces
longing for freedom over the rim

Highlighted
flowing wavy tresses
cascading over rocky shoulders

Rushing sounds
of an endless stampede
racing and galloping through the air

Frothy fluffs
of white bubbly splendor
splashing, glistening in the sunlight


Sandra M. Haight
October 27, 2014

~7th Place~
Contest: Some Form of Crystalline
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Connie Marcum Wong November 9, 2014 at 5:05 AM Your poem truly tells a complete story with a beginning a middle and an end. Great writing Sandra! Congrats on your win! Sandra Haight November 9, 2014 at 8:25 PM Connie, thank you for stopping by with your positive comments and congratulations. I really appreciate it. Sandra

Paul Callus November 8, 2014 at 3:30 PM Love your creative imagery, Sandra. Both movement and sound make a great impact. Congrats on a fine win! // paul Sandra Haight November 9, 2014 at 8:26 PM Thank you Paul. I am pleased you like it. It was nice of you to stop by with your encouraging comments and congratulations. It was a fun form to work with. Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans November 8, 2014 at 8:18 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Sandra. Sandra Haight November 8, 2014 at 2:42 PM Thanks, Brenda. This was another fun form to work with. Hugs, Sandra

Dr.Ram Mehta November 8, 2014 at 4:52 AM Nicely cascaded piece, congrats on the win Sandra Haight November 8, 2014 at 2:43 PM Thank you so much, Dr. Ram. Sandra

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2014 at 2:22 AM I like the idea of a stampede and how this was developed fully within your artpiece, Sandra.. thank you for being part of my contest with special congrats! Sandra Haight November 7, 2014 at 1:57 PM Hi Nette, it was an honor to participate in your contest. I enjoyed working with this form, and I thank you for choosing mine to be among the winners. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 10:05 PM a rush of beauty in your waterfall!! Congrats for your win. Sandra Haight November 7, 2014 at 1:55 PM Hi Andrea, thank you for stopping by with your congratulations. Sandra Sandra Haight November 6, 2014 at 10:13 PM Andrea, thank you so much for stopping by with your congratulations and nice comment. Sandra

Debra Squyres November 6, 2014 at 9:49 PM I can hear that roar and see that cascade from the shoulder in my mind so clearly !! Mark of a good poet in my book.. to let one see and hear what they hear. Just glorious !! Congratulations on your win !! Sandra Haight November 6, 2014 at 10:02 PM Hi Debra, thank you so much for stopping by with your encouraging comments, congratulations, and fav. I really appreciate it so much. It was a great form to work with. Sandra Debra Squyres November 6, 2014 at 9:50 PM Putting this in my favs... thank you !!

Maurice Yvonne November 6, 2014 at 8:35 PM I would of liked to see this much higher on the list but I am happy you placed. Congratulations on your win Sandra. Sandra Haight November 6, 2014 at 10:12 PM Thanks, Maurice, I was happy to have placed, and it's nice that you really enjoyed it. I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Sandra

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 3:32 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs jan xx Sandra Haight November 6, 2014 at 3:35 PM Thanks so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra

Maurice Yvonne October 29, 2014 at 1:14 AM Wow, what a stunning write. This is my favorite so far on this theme. Sandra Haight October 29, 2014 at 8:31 AM Happy day for me with all your great comments! Thanks so much, Maurice. Sandra

Jan Allison October 27, 2014 at 2:08 PM beautifully creative with wonderful imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx Sandra Haight October 27, 2014 at 3:20 PM Thanks, Jan, so happy you like it. Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans October 27, 2014 at 12:33 PM Very beautifully written Sandra. I especially love the third stanza, because when I think of waterfalls the loudness of them is the first that comes to mind. Definitely a 7 Sandra Haight October 27, 2014 at 3:19 PM Hi Brenda, thank you so much for your encouraging comments, and for your generous rating! Hugs, Sandra