Waterfall

Leaping fish spawning
leaf floats by waterfall
lyrical bird sings 


Waves crashing on beach
river maundering 
clouds puffy white sail by
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Aloha, Shadow. I was delighted with the wordplay you've presented within your entertaining haiku forms. The active staging, the nearby friendlies, the faraway familiars ... magnificent harmony, my friend. Best of Seasons and 2024. Aloha, William
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 6:01 PM
ty William and aloha ty I enjoy writing in the form some time read my bees or rainbow if like this style hugs Shadow
Sharma  Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Oh my, this is such a breathtaking haiku poem which beautifully captures the scenic elegance of nature and oceanic imageries in such an elegant way~ wow! "leaf floats by waterfall", "clouds puffy white sail by" Ahh, smooth serenity flows in these words... Absolutely impeccable..
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Hi Hiya ty very much I am so glad you like them and for your visit hugs Shadow
One Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Two vivid haiku here. Your choice of words are very good and the little use of adjectives are always important for these forms and you have done that here...
Hamilton Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 2:23 PM
ty so much SO for your comments hugs
Poet Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 11:54 AM
You did a great job, with this both haikus, Shadow. The picture you conveyed of a fish jumping out of the water to make babies, the leaf floating in the water, and a bird singing a beautiful song is just perfect.
Hamilton Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 2:26 PM
sotto ty so much for your remarks hugs Shadow
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