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Waterfall

Roaring waterfall
Ever so peacefully falls;
peaceful energy.

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Daniel Neal

Date: 12/19/2008 1:38:00 PM

This is a lovely scene you painted with your words, I love the way the water falls to the basin. You sure know how to describe beautiful places. DN

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/18/2008 8:23:00 PM

Thanks for you comments...Raul

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/18/2008 8:18:00 PM

Wow, powerful energy sums it all up. You have a way with words. Elizabeth

Sue Mason

Date: 12/18/2008 4:49:00 PM

Profound timely statement with this one, Steve. Just beautifully done with this wonderful form and the last line is a zinger!! Hope your holidays are warm, wonderful and that '09 is good for you.

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/18/2008 3:54:00 PM

There is definitely something about a waterfall, the sound for one, the sight another and standing under one - well too wonderful a thought. Very peaceful, soothing and cleansing. This haiku is awesome - it stays with you. Love, Shar

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/18/2008 2:41:00 PM

This is very beautiful, love the impression of a peaceful waterfall rushing down. Haiku's are my favorite poetic art form. God bless and Happy Holidays to you. :) Amy

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/18/2008 2:34:00 PM

Great work here Caramel, The energy a waterfall brings is tremendous, then it all comes to s peaceful basin...Raul

Ann Anderson

Date: 12/18/2008 2:30:00 PM

I felt that emotion fantastic, best wishes Ann.

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/18/2008 2:26:00 PM

Waterfalls are peaceful, you captured this well. Nice haiku, DN