Waterfall

Clear crystals flow free
    Then fall like a drapery 
          Bubbling below in glee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Rider Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 11:59 AM
nice imagery, very pretty. and thank you for your comments also, on my poetry.
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September 3, 2008 at 11:34 AM
a very nice refreshing and warm piece, thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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September 2, 2008 at 7:30 PM
like this nice and simplistic write, and the metaphors within, take care D-nyce
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September 2, 2008 at 5:44 PM
Nice use of imagery here. The alliteration gives this poem a rhythmic feel that works well to convey your thoughts. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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September 2, 2008 at 10:25 AM
This is such a happy poem, and a happy image! Nice work!...Carrie
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