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Waterfall

Clear crystals flow free Then fall like a drapery Bubbling below in glee

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/19/2008 11:59:00 AM

nice imagery, very pretty. and thank you for your comments also, on my poetry.

James Foulk

Date: 9/3/2008 11:34:00 AM

a very nice refreshing and warm piece, thank you for reading my poem and for your comment

Deneen White

Date: 9/2/2008 7:30:00 PM

like this nice and simplistic write, and the metaphors within, take care D-nyce

Date: 9/2/2008 5:44:00 PM

Nice use of imagery here. The alliteration gives this poem a rhythmic feel that works well to convey your thoughts. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/2/2008 10:25:00 AM

This is such a happy poem, and a happy image! Nice work!...Carrie