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Waterfall

Clear crystals flow free Then fall like a drapery Bubbling below in glee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/19/2008 11:59:00 AM
nice imagery, very pretty. and thank you for your comments also, on my poetry.
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Date: 9/3/2008 11:34:00 AM
a very nice refreshing and warm piece, thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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Date: 9/2/2008 7:30:00 PM
like this nice and simplistic write, and the metaphors within, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/2/2008 5:44:00 PM
Nice use of imagery here. The alliteration gives this poem a rhythmic feel that works well to convey your thoughts. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 9/2/2008 10:25:00 AM
This is such a happy poem, and a happy image! Nice work!...Carrie
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