Bobby May Poet Rhyme

Waterfall

As the water falls upon the rocks
The sounds become deafening
Calling to all that can hear
A peaceful tranquility

With birds singing and light winds blowing
I feel small drops of water tapping my face
As if it was God showing me his grace
For who else could have created this beautiful place

With my eyes closed I smell lilac among the tress
Filling my lungs with many different fragrances
A bouquet of flavors running through my mind
Here there is no time

For time has stopped at this beautiful place
To give you a chance to ignore the human race
Giving you a chance to remember
Adam in the garden with Eve

Contest: Picturesque Rhyme
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
Date Created: 09/09/2019

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Jan Allison September 22, 2019 at 1:38 PM Fabulous imagery and a great interpretation of the image, good luck in the contest:-) After reading your comment on my poem I'm pleased to see the only thing the same is the title - phew you had me worried there!:-) hugs Jan xx Bobby May September 22, 2019 at 1:58 PM LOL JAN, thank you my friend!!

Gershon Wolf September 10, 2019 at 2:56 PM Hey, aren't you going to share the address?! I'd sure like to find that Garden!! Thanks, Bobby. Best wishes, gw

Kim Rodrigues September 9, 2019 at 5:29 PM Lovely, Bobby! Just what we need. Bobby May September 10, 2019 at 12:15 AM :-)

Richard Lamoureux September 9, 2019 at 10:30 AM A garden worth seeking. Good luck in the contest.