Watered-Down Juice-Monotetra

A friendship made can often fade
I had one that quickly decayed
Loyalty was just a charade
I was dismayed      I was dismayed

My eyes did not at first conceive
the lies her tongue began to weave
Slanderous words that made me grieve
I was naive        I was naïve

She criticized me on twitter
Her betrayal left me bitter
What a mean gossiping critter
Won't acquit her      Won't acquit her

Cruel, the rumors she had spewed
She needs a change of attitude
A real friend is never that crude
Hateful or rude        Hateful or rude

Was upset when double crossed
Then realized nothing was lost 
My looks burned her like Winter frost
Friendship tossed     Friendship tossed

They day I told her we were through
She said, "I was a friend to you."
I walked away because she knew
It was not true       It was not true

From ones like that, I turn away
Devious people who betray
She taunted like a mocking jay
And I, her prey     And I, her prey



January 5th, 2021
Watered-Down Juice Contest by Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Friendships come and go. Only a very few are real friends. Enjoy your win/day/week with blessings................
Seeker Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Wow! Love the way each last line emphasises the undercurrent emotions! Beautiful! Congrats on your win!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Sad tale indeed... congrats on your win friend. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 12:08 PM
What a wonderful poem, Jenna:-) It's a gripping write throughout! I've never heard of this Monotetra form. I've got to try it sometime. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Wolf Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 3:48 PM
This monotetra is a very appealing poetic form, which you've utilized superbly. For true friends we pray... For true friends we pray. ~ Gershon
Logan Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Thanks for liking this one, Gershon. I appreciate sincere friends.
Bordner Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 3:45 PM
That's deep Jenna...J.A.B.
Logan Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Thanks, Justin.
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 3:34 PM
wow jenna this is a gem of a poem I wish i could have written it about someone who is no longer in my life, love the rhyme and the impact of that repeated phrase:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Thanks, Jan. I enjoy the form and the emphasis does create an impact.
Cunningham Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 1:26 PM
She's well out of your life Jenna, good riddance I say Well written verse. Tom
Logan Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Yes, she is, Tom. Thanks for your thoughts.
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