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Water Weary

Sailing in a boat,
Ha, surrounded by the ocean,
Thirsting for water!


~"Out of water" contest by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Mohan Chutani

April 5, 2015 at 5:13 AM

"water, water everywhere, nor a drop to drink" Nice win, Abdul. Mohan

Abdul Malik Mandani

April 5, 2015 at 11:16 AM

Tell me about it! Thanks Mohan.

Sandra Haight

April 4, 2015 at 7:22 PM

A very powerful Haiku, Abdul! How many have suffered this...Congrats on your win! Sandra

Abdul Malik Mandani

April 5, 2015 at 11:15 AM

Glad you liked it. Only when you visualize yourself overwhelmed by the ocean and not a drop of water to drink, it will hit you in your throat with a ton of sand of the shore!!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

April 4, 2015 at 3:10 PM

Nice haiku, Abdul, Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. You placed well. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576

Abdul Malik Mandani

April 5, 2015 at 11:08 AM

Thanks Sheri, appreciate much.