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Water Weary

Sailing in a boat, Ha, surrounded by the ocean, Thirsting for water! ~"Out of water" contest by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/5/2015 5:13:00 AM

"water, water everywhere, nor a drop to drink" Nice win, Abdul. Mohan

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/5/2015 11:16:00 AM

Tell me about it! Thanks Mohan.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/4/2015 7:22:00 PM

A very powerful Haiku, Abdul! How many have suffered this...Congrats on your win! Sandra

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/5/2015 11:15:00 AM

Glad you liked it. Only when you visualize yourself overwhelmed by the ocean and not a drop of water to drink, it will hit you in your throat with a ton of sand of the shore!!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/4/2015 3:10:00 PM

Nice haiku, Abdul, Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. You placed well. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/5/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Sheri, appreciate much.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2014 4:17:00 PM

almost funny yes? Light & Love

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2014 12:44:00 PM

love the humour in this haiku:-) hugs Jan xx