Water of Life-W

HE sent guiding light
To enjoy fountain of joy
Amidst pure water.

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14th Placement
Contest: Guiding Light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 23, 2015 at 11:05 AM
:) SKAT
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April 25, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Good morning love the write enjoyed. Have your self a wonderful Sunday,,Irma
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April 23, 2010 at 6:49 PM
My congratulations on your win! Great insight!! And thanks for your kind comments on my poem, Dr.Mehta! Peace, Audrey
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest DR. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations DR. on your unique poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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April 22, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Hi, again, Dr. Ram. I wanted to return to your poem this afternoon to congratulate you and to reiterate my appreciation for your refreshing view of the photo.
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April 22, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and another sweet win for u to so enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Chamma Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 2:04 PM
A beautiful Haiku. We went on a camping trip last week to an area where there was running water between two mountains. Reminded me of that for some reason. Farah
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April 22, 2010 at 1:43 PM
I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Keep on writing! Enjoy your success. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Very nice! Congratulations are in order, I see. LUv, andrea
Moreno Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Dr. Mehta, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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April 22, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Beautiful Haiku, with a spiritual nature to it. Very well written. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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April 22, 2010 at 11:29 AM
What an uplifting and inspirational view. You have me smiling. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for stopping by to comment. Karen
M Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Very rejuvenating! The vigor and potent healing power of this fountain's water cleanses my heart refreshingly. Magical water.
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 9:56 AM
I like your allude to water as fountain of joy DR., Good luck with your winning presentation in the competition. An awesome presentation it is, Agape, Moses
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