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Water Moccasin

ancient water springs next to the lazing Moccasin upon the shoreline

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/25/2017 4:41:00 PM
Good intro, but gotta take it outside the box (the AHA moment)----for instance, in the last line----lightening strikes----or anything that is other than an obvious continuation of thought----later
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:04:00 PM
Ryn, lovely imagery in your wonderful haiku. Enjoyed!
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