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Water Lilies

Aura of splendor, Emanating gorgeousness; Garden on the pond.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:10:00 PM

I enjoy your last lines, the garden on the pond is genius. Tyler

Date: 4/27/2009 4:54:00 PM

Got me smiling with this scene. Nice use of imagery. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 4/26/2009 8:22:00 AM

Monet would have approved Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/26/2009 8:21:00 AM

This is breathtaking my friend..love that last line..well done.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/26/2009 8:18:00 AM

Like a painting.....splendor is the perfect word!

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/26/2009 6:03:00 AM

A magical write bringing a smile to start my day. Beautiful. Smiles from Lolita

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/26/2009 4:31:00 AM

There used to be a pond near town that my parents would take me to so that I could feed the llamas. I remember seeing the water lillies and thinking they were magic. Wonderful poem, made me smile Raul