Water Lilies

Aura of splendor,
Emanating gorgeousness;
Garden on the pond.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:10 PM
I enjoy your last lines, the garden on the pond is genius. Tyler
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April 27, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Got me smiling with this scene. Nice use of imagery. Karen
Strand Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Monet would have approved Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Higgins Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:21 AM
This is breathtaking my friend..love that last line..well done.
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:18 AM
Like a painting.....splendor is the perfect word!
Townsend Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 6:03 AM
A magical write bringing a smile to start my day. Beautiful. Smiles from Lolita
Ginn Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 4:31 AM
There used to be a pond near town that my parents would take me to so that I could feed the llamas. I remember seeing the water lillies and thinking they were magic. Wonderful poem, made me smile Raul
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