Get Your Premium Membership

Water Is

A dripping, drizzling, falling drop, Which hits the ground with a bouncing plop. A rolling, flowing, surging force, Which carves the land and runs its course. A cooling, soothing, refreshing thing, Which calms the soul and makes it sing. A soaking, drenching, dousing substance, Which engulfs the world's continents. A sustaining, quenching, natural element, Which fosters life and makes it relevent. TLH © 2-14-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/29/2012 3:33:00 PM
Hey this is really nice. I am glad to find this older one of yours that I had not seen yet!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2012 12:32:00 PM
Water of love, deep in the ground. That's a Dire Straits lyric that your poem reminded me of. And so the pebbles thin and fall. As mountains answer rivers call. To filter heavens light and love. That rained down on from up above.
Login to Reply
Harrington Avatar
Tanya Harrington
Date: 7/24/2012 12:38:00 PM
As always I enjoy you inspired comments! Lovely
Date: 7/24/2012 9:23:00 AM
how fluid this piece with patterned rhyming all throughout, tanya... sail on!..:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Harrington Avatar
Tanya Harrington
Date: 7/24/2012 12:38:00 PM
Thanks, I'm riding the waves! :)
Date: 7/24/2012 9:02:00 AM
You have such a natural flow to your work...Outstanding!
Login to Reply
Harrington Avatar
Tanya Harrington
Date: 7/24/2012 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Caleb. So do you!
Date: 7/23/2012 4:08:00 PM
Very refreshing write this one is Tanya! I really enjoyed the pleasing nature of your write! What a glorious rhyming scheme you did here, very catchy and delightful! Awesome piece, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2012 3:54:00 PM
again.....well written Tanya !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things