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Water Flows Through Hose

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                                                  Water flows through hose
                                             Carefree about life flows flows....
                                                     Worry causes kink






(VBS last week, sermon this morning by Joseph Prince influenced this write...Scripture 
that I used to base it from "Bible"...Matthew 6:25-34)

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Nick Bagnall Date: 6/18/2010 5:33:00 AM I love the last line - well done Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/14/2010 9:35:00 PM oh, wow, you really did well here. Maybe this is even a senryu since it is a parallel to human nature! What a great analogy! Oh, and my villanelle indictment of the blight. you got it right, mankind's cruelty to women. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Tirzah Conway Date: 6/14/2010 12:16:00 PM Quite true! Darn that worry!~Tirzah~ Login to Reply

Simone Segal Date: 6/14/2010 10:16:00 AM Great write Sara, check out dr Masaru Emoto water crystals, i'm sure you'll find it very interesting! love Simone Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 6/14/2010 10:04:00 AM This haiku is packed with relevancy regarding life. It also flows very well. Great job! Joseph Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/14/2010 9:16:00 AM Very nice Haiku ..very creative Sara.. and great Bible verse.. Matthew is my fav Gospel.. enjoyed and if for any contest ..good luck..with luv.. Linda-Marie Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 6/14/2010 7:45:00 AM enjoyed reading today. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/14/2010 7:30:00 AM Such an interesting comparison in this wonderful poem, Sara! Well done ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Faleshia Murphy Date: 6/14/2010 7:22:00 AM very nice write enjoyed faleshia Login to Reply