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Water Flows Through Hose

. Water flows through hose Carefree about life flows flows.... Worry causes kink (VBS last week, sermon this morning by Joseph Prince influenced this write...Scripture that I used to base it from "Bible"...Matthew 6:25-34)

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/18/2010 5:33:00 AM

I love the last line - well done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:35:00 PM

oh, wow, you really did well here. Maybe this is even a senryu since it is a parallel to human nature! What a great analogy! Oh, and my villanelle indictment of the blight. you got it right, mankind's cruelty to women. LUv, Andrea

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/14/2010 12:16:00 PM

Quite true! Darn that worry!~Tirzah~

Simone Segal

Date: 6/14/2010 10:16:00 AM

Great write Sara, check out dr Masaru Emoto water crystals, i'm sure you'll find it very interesting! love Simone

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/14/2010 10:04:00 AM

This haiku is packed with relevancy regarding life. It also flows very well. Great job! Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/14/2010 9:16:00 AM

Very nice Haiku ..very creative Sara.. and great Bible verse.. Matthew is my fav Gospel.. enjoyed and if for any contest ..good luck..with luv.. Linda-Marie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/14/2010 7:45:00 AM

enjoyed reading today.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2010 7:30:00 AM

Such an interesting comparison in this wonderful poem, Sara! Well done ~ Carrie

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 6/14/2010 7:22:00 AM

very nice write enjoyed faleshia