Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Water Flows Through Hose

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                                                  Water flows through hose
                                             Carefree about life flows flows....
                                                     Worry causes kink






(VBS last week, sermon this morning by Joseph Prince influenced this write...Scripture 
that I used to base it from "Bible"...Matthew 6:25-34)

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Nick Bagnall June 18, 2010 at 5:33 AM I love the last line - well done

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2010 at 9:35 PM oh, wow, you really did well here. Maybe this is even a senryu since it is a parallel to human nature! What a great analogy! Oh, and my villanelle indictment of the blight. you got it right, mankind's cruelty to women. LUv, Andrea

Tirzah Conway June 14, 2010 at 12:16 PM Quite true! Darn that worry!~Tirzah~

Simone Segal June 14, 2010 at 10:16 AM Great write Sara, check out dr Masaru Emoto water crystals, i'm sure you'll find it very interesting! love Simone

Joseph Spence Sr June 14, 2010 at 10:04 AM This haiku is packed with relevancy regarding life. It also flows very well. Great job! Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 14, 2010 at 9:16 AM Very nice Haiku ..very creative Sara.. and great Bible verse.. Matthew is my fav Gospel.. enjoyed and if for any contest ..good luck..with luv.. Linda-Marie

Doris Culverhouse June 14, 2010 at 7:45 AM enjoyed reading today.

Carrie Richards June 14, 2010 at 7:30 AM Such an interesting comparison in this wonderful poem, Sara! Well done ~ Carrie

Faleshia Murphy June 14, 2010 at 7:22 AM very nice write enjoyed faleshia