Water Flows

How sweetly flows this water  
onto bright gilt rocks 
pray shine for me forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chu Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Nice write. I'm thirsty and I feel like swimming for some reason.
Shango Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 8:58 AM
This my first time reading you, I like your work and will return later. You are a great poet and I hope we shall be great as friends
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