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Water Drop

A single blue bead,
Falls gracefully though the air;
Rippling the waves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/20/2010 10:27:00 PM
Justin, I have just found a mentor! Imagery brought near, both to eye and ear. True poetic art, have you sown from thin air! Joshua
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Date: 7/8/2009 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! - eduardo
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Date: 5/30/2009 4:45:00 PM
Nice imagery, love the how it falls gracefully...Raul
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Date: 5/27/2009 8:18:00 PM
It's amazing how widespread the affect of "A single blue bead" can be, Justin. Very poignant haiku! Love, Carolyn
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