Water Drop

A single blue bead,
Falls gracefully though the air;
Rippling the waves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adam Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 10:27 PM
Justin, I have just found a mentor! Imagery brought near, both to eye and ear. True poetic art, have you sown from thin air! Joshua
Orozco Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Beautiful imagery! - eduardo
Moreno Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 4:45 PM
Nice imagery, love the how it falls gracefully...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 8:18 PM
It's amazing how widespread the affect of "A single blue bead" can be, Justin. Very poignant haiku! Love, Carolyn
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