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Water and Sky

The dark night sky seems endless And it's saturated with stars Looking up at the constellations Wondering which way to get to mars There's a beautiful glow to the right Lights up part of the sky A special full blue moon Sits among the stars up high The reflection upon the water Brings a sparkle to the still lake Like diamonds bouncing onto ice A beautiful sight it sure does make The blue glow of the full moon Highlights the lakes' pebbly shores A dark night so mysterious The beauty of the great outdoors 04/01/2018 WATER AND SKY

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Date: 1/4/2018 8:13:00 PM
Susan, you poem is very beautiful and that is the main point of my comments. Secondary, it that I believe you may have wanted to type 'night' instead of 'right' on the 5th line. If I'm wrong, please just ignore me and accept my compliment that you painted a lovely picture I truly enjoyed. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:18:00 PM
I LOVE this!
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