Water

glistening ice sheet
sliding cars people fall down
winter comes again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fingon Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Great image however, I think there are too many images in this haiku.
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 8:31 PM
that is what I hate about winter. you got that right!
Costales Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 9:25 PM
hey, am just starting to enjoy the weather, I don't want to think about winter yet..Seriously, your haiku paints vividly the images of winter..enjoyed
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