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glistening ice sheet sliding cars people fall down winter comes again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/31/2020 1:24:00 PM
Great image however, I think there are too many images in this haiku.
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:31:00 PM
that is what I hate about winter. you got that right!
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Date: 7/11/2015 9:25:00 PM
hey, am just starting to enjoy the weather, I don't want to think about winter yet..Seriously, your haiku paints vividly the images of winter..enjoyed
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