Water

Water flows slowly Blue, delicate, and shiny Through the waterfall

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 12:17:00 AM

Hi Maya, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2013 4:11:00 PM

delightful so calm and peaceful Shadow

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/3/2013 11:21:00 AM

I love waterfalls. This was exquisite, yet simple. Very well done!

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 11:01:00 AM

Maya, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~