Water

Rushing waves crash down
A single rock at the end
Beyond beautiful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marymkilker Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 12:44 PM
nice.
Guzzi Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:43 PM
a beautiful image. Light 7 Love
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, john
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:07 AM
A stunning image in your haiku, John. Congratulations on being in the winners' circle. Best wishes, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 7:30 AM
Congrats John on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water .. enjoy today with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 10:01 PM
Congratualtions, john. Love that "single rock" line! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup John. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Nice write on the flowing water nice image of waves cashing on the single rock, John
Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Great Haiku..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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