Water

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planet water

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Our life as 
        c 
          r
           e
             a
               t
                u
                  r
                    e
                      s 
                 of the land
            belies the lie, 
that we land-blubbers be.
                                For the blood and fluids 
                       within our bodies
                   are derived from the 
       primordial ocean that
                we carried with us as we 
               c
                 r
                  a 
                    w
                      l
                       e
                        d 
                   up the land
            on our bellies. 
   Life originated in the sea, which still bathes all our cells. 
                          For water is the hub of life, its our mother, matrix, 
             sustainer and maintainer, here on Planet Water.........

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