Water

"Water" That which is forgiving And so much a part of living, Meanders through all life With little twists and turns, Never seeking more, Void of desire, yearns. Softly flowing, Seeping everywhere, With a lack of purpose, Yet, with purpose beyond compare. Caressing all it touches, Gently meek and mild, But a force to reckon with, Should it so be riled. A cradle of life In every new beginning. A keeper of all life Swirling, still, or spinning. Without its presence Life could never be. Nothing would exist, The sky, the earth, the sea. The matter that does matter To each and all of us, Would be lost, pointless, Just drifting, useless dust. W a t e r ... sustaining... ... life. Written by Artsieladie/Sharon Donnelly ©2007-08-07 All rights reserved.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/9/2018 3:20:00 AM

Great rhyme Artsie, the essence of all life, yet many struggle in drought hit countries, we seem to take so much for granted. Tom.a

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/13/2018 9:39:00 PM

Thank you, Tom, for your added thoughts. You're so right, we do take so much for granted. Have a pleasant day. :) ~ Artsie

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/8/2018 1:13:00 PM

Nicely written Artsieladie. I enjoyed this :)

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/13/2018 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi, for your kind words. Have a pleasant day. :) ~ Artsie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Without water we are lost ... both humans, animals and all our earth - A great poem, Sharon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/13/2018 9:16:00 PM

So true, Anne-Lise. Thank you for your visit and positive feedback. Have a happy day. :) hugs ~ Artsie