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Watching You Watching Me

What the hell you looking at It’s rude to stare you daft old bat I think I’m gonna look right back Some might call that tit for tat That bloke you're with seems quite refined Doesn’t seem to be your kind His taste in women I’m debating Clearly, you’re no oil painting You’ve stared at me for quite a while Debating if I smirk or smile But here’s a secret you should know that look means I’ve just let one go So, rest assured that I’m not down And that my smile is not a frown Don’t listen to that tour guide geezer I’m not a moaner… and my name ain’t Lisa 15 November 2021 Contest: Become A Painting Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 11/16/2021 3:51:00 PM
OMG, this is hilarious. You are one of the funnier writers here at Soup!
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/16/2021 4:02:00 PM
Sometimes… scrub that… OFTEN I just can’t help myself. Set me a challenge and I’ll twist it as far as I dare. I get a lot of N/A but hey, it’s free and it’s fun. Glad you enjoyed, Andrea. Terry
Date: 11/15/2021 10:58:00 AM
Lol, your humour mill is churning them out today Terry. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/15/2021 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Tom. One of those ‘trying it on’ entries. Don’t seriously expect a placement but you can’t have too many N/As. (Even though I have a growing collection…) Terry ;-)