Watching Me Empty

Something wasn't right, So i left my chest.
Instead of following my head was nobody 
I see a lot of night and day 
lack of dreams but a better tomorrow 
is what it seems.
Deep thoughts and good bad choices.
positive vibes will heat boil poison.
Tell me a lie but i will always know
put me aside but i will never go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 20, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Fernando, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 20, 2014 at 8:08 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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