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Watching a Sunset 1

Watching a Sunset Sunset in the sky, in colorful splendor Sunset of life, a remembrance of blunders Sunset of love, a matter of dejection As love once was of unstinted affection. A play of oranges, golds and reds in sky As a posse of thoughts are passing me by. Digressing to dream of a golden mountain And a falling sun filtering through fountains I flit back to view the spectacle in the sky Now, a poetic play of hues as, home, birds fly. For Skat's contest on 27/6/2013

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Date: 7/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD
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Date: 6/30/2013 11:07:00 AM
Very well done... Congratulations on your win.... Jake
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:51:00 PM
Jag, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/9/2012 7:11:00 PM
May the moon set on many more sunsets.
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Date: 7/17/2012 5:11:00 PM
Take a peek at my fictitious sunset, friend...It hit 100 degrees F AGAIN today...I feel as tho I live in the Sahara! gwendolen
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Date: 7/17/2012 2:52:00 PM
Beautiful view of a sunset Jag; wonderful entry for the contest; Francine will love it! LIzzie
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:45:00 PM
Nicely described, Jag. Hey, long time no see!!
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:19:00 AM
Jag, this is lovely,, a picture in a picture,,, good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 7/15/2012 2:17:00 PM
This is the only poem that I will have time to read this weekend...working long hours...I will be savoring the intense images of colour and emotion...A new favorite for my collection! It is a beauty! I also notice that your rhyme does not sound forced or unnatural which is often hard for poets to do...Glad you shared this with your fellow poets, Jaggy! Awesome job! gwendolen
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Date: 7/15/2012 12:31:00 PM
Jag, you brought some magical imagery across in this write of yours. All the best for the contest :) Wilma
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Date: 7/15/2012 10:29:00 AM
these lines will leave the readers to imagine what is there beyond a sunset that promises a thousand things... good work, jag! good luck and huggs! :)
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Date: 7/14/2012 4:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2012 1:57:00 PM
many splendid facets of sunsets and colors Jag.. u always write so intensely and beautifully with expressions.. best wishes luv as I hope u check out my contest just posted today..luv..
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Date: 7/14/2012 12:16:00 PM
Happy weekend to you Jag. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and the best to you in Francine's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2012 9:50:00 AM
great view,S.J,GREAT VIEW
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