S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Rhyme

Watching a Sunset 1

Watching a Sunset

Sunset in the sky, in colorful splendor
Sunset of life, a remembrance of blunders
Sunset of love, a matter of dejection 
As love once was of unstinted affection.

A play of oranges, golds and reds in  sky
As a posse of thoughts are passing me by.
Digressing  to dream of a golden mountain
And a falling sun filtering through fountains

I  flit back to view the spectacle in the sky
Now, a poetic play of hues as, home, birds fly.


For Skat's contest on 27/6/2013

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Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 11:25 AM Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

John Posey June 30, 2013 at 11:07 AM Very well done... Congratulations on your win.... Jake

Skat A June 29, 2013 at 3:51 PM Jag, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Robert Johnson August 9, 2012 at 7:11 PM May the moon set on many more sunsets.

Gwendolen Song July 17, 2012 at 5:11 PM Take a peek at my fictitious sunset, friend...It hit 100 degrees F AGAIN today...I feel as tho I live in the Sahara! gwendolen

Elizabeth Wesley July 17, 2012 at 2:52 PM Beautiful view of a sunset Jag; wonderful entry for the contest; Francine will love it! LIzzie

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2012 at 8:45 PM Nicely described, Jag. Hey, long time no see!!

Poet Destroyer A July 16, 2012 at 3:19 AM Jag, this is lovely,, a picture in a picture,,, good luck in the contest..pd

Gwendolen Song July 15, 2012 at 2:17 PM This is the only poem that I will have time to read this weekend...working long hours...I will be savoring the intense images of colour and emotion...A new favorite for my collection! It is a beauty! I also notice that your rhyme does not sound forced or unnatural which is often hard for poets to do...Glad you shared this with your fellow poets, Jaggy! Awesome job! gwendolen

Wilma Neels July 15, 2012 at 12:31 PM Jag, you brought some magical imagery across in this write of yours. All the best for the contest :) Wilma

Nette Onclaud July 15, 2012 at 10:29 AM these lines will leave the readers to imagine what is there beyond a sunset that promises a thousand things... good work, jag! good luck and huggs! :)

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2012 at 4:44 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 14, 2012 at 1:57 PM many splendid facets of sunsets and colors Jag.. u always write so intensely and beautifully with expressions.. best wishes luv as I hope u check out my contest just posted today..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2012 at 12:16 PM Happy weekend to you Jag. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and the best to you in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Richard Palmer July 14, 2012 at 9:50 AM great view,S.J,GREAT VIEW