Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Watch Your Step

I thought it odd, this parallel
'Tween what is couth, and what is feral
But sings the Herald, my steps in peril-
Considered, I, that all was well...

I know this path is dangerous,
Upset that Life is merely heinous 
When all I want is to be Famous,
So ends this tragic tale!

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Robin Davis January 18, 2014 at 9:34 PM Chan The Man What a powerful write about life and the struggles we face everyday to survive and get through. Nicely done my friend. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Demise poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea Just That Archaic Poet January 19, 2014 at 7:43 AM Thanks for another review, Sweet Pea <3

Ryan Wegenast September 12, 2013 at 6:34 PM Perfect!! Just That Archaic Poet September 13, 2013 at 10:18 AM Thanks again, Ryan :)

Kelly Deschler September 12, 2013 at 12:30 PM So true! I think this is what every poet here wants, I know I do!...A very honest and dramatic poem! Nicely done!...Thank you so much for reading and commenting kindly on my poems. I really appreciate all of them! Kelly Deschler September 21, 2013 at 5:30 PM I loved Savage Garden! Just That Archaic Poet September 12, 2013 at 4:20 PM Kelly, you are quite talented and deserve to have your work lauded. Thank you, truly, madly, deeply (to quote that old Savage garden song lol). I am humbled by your reviews of my work :)

Karen Anglesey September 11, 2013 at 7:41 PM The struggles and conflicts of life told in a fantastic Shakespearean tale :) Just That Archaic Poet September 12, 2013 at 9:38 AM I'm all about some drama LOL! Thanks, hon <3