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Watch Me Tremble

watch me tremble hey whom said that more than what enough inside my mind come with me here on this carpet we ride what's left to hold here i am watch me tremble ?

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Date: 10/4/2017 9:26:00 AM
Interesting, "watch me tremble" ? are you sure?
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Date: 10/1/2017 12:16:00 PM
I am not sure I have ridden a carpet before but sounds adventurous. Do they have seat belts? When you invite someone to visit with your thoughts that takes a lot of courage.
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Date: 10/3/2017 6:41:00 AM
perhaps my arms are belts ...

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