Watch Me Tremble

watch me tremble hey whom said that more than what enough inside my mind come with me here on this carpet we ride what's left to hold here i am watch me tremble ?
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Teagan Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Interesting, "watch me tremble" ? are you sure?
Cresswell Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 12:16 PM
I am not sure I have ridden a carpet before but sounds adventurous. Do they have seat belts? When you invite someone to visit with your thoughts that takes a lot of courage.
Stars Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:41 AM
perhaps my arms are belts ...
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