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Watch Me Die

The petals of a rose, they tremble and they fall Just like my aching heart, my backs against a wall so I Scream- but no one seems to hear me (and) I Bleed- but no one seems to worry (and) I Cry- but no one spares a passing glance (and) I Die- no one seems to care My mask, it melts away as the flames burn through my bones, the pain it never fades and its worse because i know the angels are not here to save me everthing but you hates me and im stuck with all this trapped inside Im forced to sit and watch me die Im in an empty room... all hope disenegrates. nothing left to do but get drunken, high im willing to do anything just to get by so I Scream- but no one seems to hear me (and) I Bleed- but no one seems to worry (and) I Cry- but no one spares a passing glance (and) I Die- no one seems to care My mask, it melts away as the flames burn through my bones, the pain it never fades and its worse because i know the angels are not here to save me everthing but you hates me and im stuck with all this trapped inside Im forced to sit and watch me die Im forced to sit and watch me die

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Date: 12/31/2010 6:15:00 PM
Chelsea, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:03:00 PM
i feel like this is how i feel...its a very meaningful poem
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:28:00 AM
Really good poem your a good writter It was full of emotion it was way good
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:51:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:54:00 PM
You Speak The Truth.The poem is absolutely amazing!Everybody should read this poem.
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:53:00 PM
You Speak The Truth.The poem is absolutely amazing!Everybody should read this poem.
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Chelsea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:07:00 PM
Wow, incredibly powerful and it hit home like a ton of bricks. I am in that place now. Your work is good.
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Date: 12/16/2010 8:52:00 PM
Chelsea you do this form so brilliantly and this is a very thought provoking write.. Thank you for your kind comments as well ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/4/2010 12:11:00 PM
wow Chelsea, this is amazing. I know how you feel (felt), love.
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