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Watch Her Fall

A somber landscape outside her window She looks at those amber leaves full of sorrow Watching them fall from time to time Like reading a poetry away from sublime Her scarlet lips turned ghostly white Bald trees and dying ones are always on her sight She looks at a man sweeping the fading beauty and when the day falls the night was dreary A somber landscape painted with fears She looks at those dry amber leaves in tears Waiting for the sun to be sealed in an envelope as she stopped breathing, she smiled full of hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/9/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Nadine. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Nadine. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:32:00 AM
Sad and touching. Congrats on having your poem featured. Vince
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Date: 7/1/2009 2:19:00 PM
pls wake her up if you can.........how could you just stand and watch her.....such a fragrant versification.
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