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Watch and Wait

Stillness seeds this cell of death-borne illness, underscores the needs of one who cannot function by himself. Bedsheets icy white, blooming flowers in bright profusion litter uselessly. Monitors wink, blink their indifference; scant recognition, little consolation for a father and his sorrow-stricken son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/18/2012 7:37:00 AM
Dear Keith - Your descriptive talents building up to the father and son, one numb one bereft, leave me in utter silence. There is nothing like the sounds of that horrible beeping. love, Kathy
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Date: 6/17/2012 12:23:00 PM
A very well done poem, but soooo sad...sorrowful moments....but never give up. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/16/2012 11:30:00 AM
Great poem!And you are a great poet!
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Date: 6/16/2012 7:12:00 AM
sad so sad,my co worker daughter died yesterday from cancer she was only 16, I went to look for her in the hospital,your poem brings back so much memories,a mother and her sorrow...
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Date: 6/16/2012 7:06:00 AM
Patience is a virtue our Father does say! Peace be with you.
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