Watch and Laugh

I'm slipping, i'm loosing my grip
This panicing, it's making me trip
Falling from comfort way up high
It won't stop, no matter how hard I try
In my feet, each tingle and pin i feel
All my pride and success, you freely can steal
This fear i have is what's holding me back
It doensn't take much to lead me off track
Your help, comfort and support would be nice
But all of your actions are on the dice
If it takes your fancy or you receive gain
You might make effort to relieve my pain
But more than often you watch and laugh 
As i travel alone on this darkening path.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 7, 2010 at 8:59 AM
This is a very nice poem, but there was a line or two that kind of went off rhythm a bit...
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