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Watch and Laugh

I'm slipping, i'm loosing my grip This panicing, it's making me trip Falling from comfort way up high It won't stop, no matter how hard I try In my feet, each tingle and pin i feel All my pride and success, you freely can steal This fear i have is what's holding me back It doensn't take much to lead me off track Your help, comfort and support would be nice But all of your actions are on the dice If it takes your fancy or you receive gain You might make effort to relieve my pain But more than often you watch and laugh As i travel alone on this darkening path.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/7/2010 8:59:00 AM
This is a very nice poem, but there was a line or two that kind of went off rhythm a bit...
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