Wasted

take away from me all my gains and wisdom earned; In grave lest wasted

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Sam Raj

Date: 8/9/2014 12:16:00 PM

Hi Mohan, Great write. A truly traditional write. I only wish you did not title these short writes. As they are a total giveaway of the subject. And further are counted as a part of the poem, in terms of words and syllables? Further it curtails my imagination? Before I read the text I am already told the basic. Subject content. I love the challenge that Haiku and Tankas give me. End of the day it's your pleasure.... TC :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2014 2:48:00 PM

Nice one, Mohan. I can't believe I never saw it yet!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/9/2014 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.