Was It Just All a Dream?

You feel like your lost in love?
  Me. Many times.

     like when you hear his/her's voice your heart just *skips*
Or when you see them walking towards you....you can't breath.
 When you had your first kiss.  But not their's. but they still thinks it's cute.
Ya'll talk 24/7. Non stop. 
When he/she just stare's into your eyes you feel butterflies EVERYWHERE through your body.

But... when they stop talking to you, you get worried, scared.
 Or when they don't act the same way that they did when ya'll first were together.
  You don't know if its over or not. but you get confused and you can't work up the courge to 
talk to him/her.

                       Was it just all a DREAM? you'll soon find out when you talk to him/her.


*comment if you please. just want to hear your thoughts (or fav poem)* :)

                                                                              -Angel4eva23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/12/2010 1:04:00 PM
It's reality. Because when you first meet someone, it's a dream. You sell yourself out and do things you normally don't do. Then when you turn back to normal, the disagreement starts. We don't know how to fall back into love, most of us don't.
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Date: 9/6/2010 6:40:00 AM
I like your introspective of love.And we all have been through it we its feels like you sparking on this beautiful adventure but then rain starts pouring down and you start to ask yourself did you imagine this all by yourself.But then are hearts mend and we embark on the next adventure.Great Poem Keep it up Brittany.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:01:00 PM
I know what you mean Brittany, love is a mystery and sometimes it hurts
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:47:00 PM
Nice sentiments and feelings of love dreamed , BrittaNY
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