Was It a Dream Or a Lie?

when i frist saw you i looked away cuz i knew if i stayed that you would be the main source 
of all my pain.ALL THE  TEARS THAT I've CRIED FOR YOU SEEMED AS IF IT WAS RAIN AND 
THAT IT WOULD NEVER END BECUASE DAY AFTER DAY I WOULD SAY ''OH MY WAT DID HE 
SAY .WHERE  DID I GO WRONG IS IT BECUASE AM NOT BLOND OR IS IT JUST BECAUSE  
AM TO FAR GONE .BUT IT MAKES SO SENSE BEcuz A AM THE BOMB.BUT STILL I CRIED SO 
HARD THAT I HAD TO CALL FOR GOD N SAID "why oh why god why "god replied plz don't 
cry and i replied i just want to dye and  god went on to say " just look up to the sky and 
come fly high in the sky but please don't say you want to dye .and when i woke and saw you 
by my side you told me ur always gona be mine and by my side i then looked up thanked jah 
n said thanx jah this dream was all a lie
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Orozco Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Good write! Welcome to poetry soup! - eduardo
Prejean Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 6:48 PM
GIRL YESS THIS HIT HOME 4 me 2
Mason Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Martha ... the form for this write is "Narrative" and I'm glad it was just a dream ... smile ... Hope to read more of your writing soon!
Lindsey Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 7:26 AM
This telling emotions and describes them well. Welcome to Poetrysoup. I INVITE U to read some of my work.
Atanacio Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 6:29 AM
emotions conflict well penned
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