Was I Condemned?

Was I condemned from the start
To live life with this heart
That's filled up with so much hate and pain
No sunshine just rain
When I try to go 
Forward, try to fly right
They tell me I'm wrong
Never will I be right
My feelings locked
In a cage
I have so much damn rage
Rains of hate 
Cast down upon me
Tears of hurt
Falls down my cheeks
Razor blades tearing at my soul...

Was I condemned from the start
To live life with this heart
That's filled up with so much hate and pain
No sunshine just rain...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Matheny Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 10:37 AM
WOW!!!!! That's very. . . . . I can't even find words just. . WOW!!!! I Love IT!!!! Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^
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December 15, 2008 at 2:15 PM
i love the way you use so meaningful rhymes. i wonder if it is that i can relate to you so much. some of your poetry could have been writen by me. but now i find myself on the oppisite end. a giver of abuse or so i have been accused. or like you condemed. John H Loving III
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