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Was a Long Time Coming

Was a long time coming so many fruitless trees, an autumn forest, laid naked of it's leaves. A hint of sunshine but eaten by the clouds, the clouds that so quickly cover like a shroud. The damndest thing a fool believes that love comes easy, it always does in dreams. Was a long time coming but the taste of love sublime a feast set before me, forever will I dine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/11/2008 5:42:00 AM
Great job with this poem. The rhyming flows so well and the second stanza rocks. Great job. Chris.
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