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Wars Without and Within

Since Adam’s fall the human race has been stuck in a hostile space. The evil forces wage a war, God’s pure image they seek to tar. This war is fought within our hearts, with thoughts that wound like whizzing darts. The fiend’s ghoulish goal is mind control, to lure, entrap, and then destroy souls. From whence spring wars which waste young lives, that scar men’s souls and widow wives? When reason dies and passion reigns then wars are born in human brains. Wars rage in the rejected soul deprived of love and left unwhole. The winds of war that within rage, wise, winsome words cannot assuage. For reasons that are not too clear, some in their bodies feel real *****. Men in women’s bodies feel trapped, and women in men’s try to adapt. The war inside is very intense, and the mental strain is immense. Many fall prey to false beliefs while some experience real relief. These inner wars drive some to drink. Others are pushed over the brink. Many find help that makes them whole, and brings real peace into their soul. So, if you’re caught up in a war, don’t let it define who you are. You cannot trust the way you feel, to reveal what is truly real. The ones who pander to your pain are not the ones who seek your gain. Let not the war your self-worth steal, but seek solutions that will heal.

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Date: 11/15/2023 4:19:00 PM
such wisdom and insight within your poem, David! I found your poem thought provoking as I remembered witnessing and experiencing wars both within and without. Both can be destructive in a variety of ways. The last verse I found to be the most powerful...it lingers in my mind. Well done, David. Have a blessed evening, Sara PS Am faving this for its depth and profundity.
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David Richmond
Date: 11/16/2023 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Sara for being a follower and for taking the time to comment on my posts. I write only when I feel I have something important to share, so, I'm always grateful when the comments I receive indicate that someone has been positively affected by what I wrote. Your comment falls into this category.
Date: 11/15/2023 3:30:00 PM
Battles within, battles outside. Satan's world is a struggle to cope with every day. Thankfully, his time has been reduced! We are in the last days...
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David Richmond
Date: 11/16/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Tom for taking the time to comment. Like you, I recognize that we are in the last days. I hope my poem will help someone to wake up.
Date: 11/15/2023 2:42:00 PM
Enjoyed Thank you for posting your work
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David Richmond
Date: 11/16/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Joyce. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem.

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