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Warrior You Are Young

When I think of a warrior, I think of a young male carrier. One who is off to fight, he will make it alright. Not one with silk hands, but one made of sand. Not one of rose kisses, that could be so delicious. Maybe my warrior is really a prince, please do not ask for the evidence. Date Written: 7/7/2020 3 Place Warrior Contest Judged:7/14/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/28/2020 2:30:00 AM

Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2020 7:44:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day.............

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/26/2020 11:39:00 AM

This is such a lovely write about the brave warrior Paula. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2020 12:27:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Have a wonderful day.............

John Watt

Date: 7/15/2020 11:51:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this today, Paula. Congratulations on your warrior win ~ John

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/15/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thank You, for your writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to win. Enjoy your day.............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/14/2020 5:30:00 PM

No I will not as for evidence I choose to believe you, congrats on your win, dear poet friend

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/15/2020 2:58:00 PM

Thank You, for reading, sending your note and your congratulations. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/14/2020 12:27:00 PM

An honourable warrior unlike my nasty one. Congrats on your win Paula. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2020 2:30:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and congratulations. It was an honor to win. You always have a wonderful write. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Silent One

Date: 7/14/2020 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2020 2:28:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and congratulations. It was an honor to win. It was a fun write. Enjoy your day...........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2020 10:30:00 PM

I really like the way you've described your warrior, Paula. He seems to be quite the Renaissance Man! Blessings, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2020 10:26:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.........................