Warmth In the Hearth

Snow on the mountain Insures warmth in the hearth On the coldest day

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Gareth Heslop

Date: 9/8/2009 2:54:00 PM

please can i be there!...really nice work...grrth

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/8/2009 12:56:00 PM

nicely done,

Dawn Murphy

Date: 9/7/2009 1:24:00 PM

Makes me want to light a fire in the fire place.

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/7/2009 9:09:00 AM

Haiku's are so descriptive, short, and to the point......Awesome Sara......:JP]

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/7/2009 5:10:00 AM

I really feel winter coming! Keep yourself war. Nice Haiku, Sara. And thanks again for your comments. Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2009 11:40:00 PM

Well penned Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/6/2009 9:05:00 PM

Soon winter will be upon us. You capture the mood quite nicely. Yours Matthew Anish

John Freeman

Date: 9/6/2009 1:03:00 PM

You build a cozy, fire while snowing on the mountain, and blowning in the coldest day. How do yu do that? Such a paradox, in three measures. Lol, Sincerely Moses

P Sheart

Date: 9/6/2009 12:53:00 PM

Hi Sara I can feel the fire crackling in this wonderful Haiku. Good job! Love Light Truth Patricia

Autumn Page

Date: 9/6/2009 12:15:00 PM

okay, nice. i guess. autumn